Thursday, October 7, 2010
Chpter 5,6,7
In this chapters it got very happy and he was treated like a person from people like one of the people that would kept him safe by people and the other thing his new master the one that was starting to show him how to read and write and that was so cool because this people were treating him like a person and showing him what to do and that's so great. In the story it is great right now because he is been treated like a person and people like him and he is knowing that he is been treated like a person and that is great. But what else i liked about the story is the details that he is using in the story and that is great and I love the story now its happy.
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I liked how you used summarized the main bulk of the three chapters. I also liked how Douglas got treated by the Aulds.
ReplyDeleteI think you had a good idea you just need to expand on it. It just needs the other side of it of how the mistress turned evil my opinion.
ReplyDeleteDearrrr T.J! i really enjoyed how you talkd about what you like and why. (: i think maybe next time that you should aslo talk about what exactly you didnt like. All in all keep up the good work buddy(:
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