Frederick Douglass

I think that I did a great job on the start of the essay but I needed to work on a few more things on the essay like the middle of the essay and do put more details into the essay to make the reader know what I'm trying to say and get the point. But I think that i did a great job on the end of the essay I think that the person that read the essay got the point that I was trying to say in the essay. I could work on a few things to make my next essay better than this one I hope I can make the next essay better than this one.